Description –

Look at the picture, soak it in then in no more than 50 words describe. (Describe in comment box)

There will be a prize for the best.

Scenic view

Can’t wait to see how interesting you can make them

Mr G

Comments (10)

  • sarahe

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    In the distance lay grasslands and castle ruins . Behind the tall castle lay a silent crstle clear stream in the stream were some fishermen . Near the castle was a wide path that took you to the coast of the stream.It is as beautiful as the sunset . The stream stretched as far as i could sea . It is amazing.

  • caitlinl

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    I could seethe majestic view over the small protected hamlet as the tide came in and out . The seagulls squawked in the background of the hamlet

  • gabriellah

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    I peered over the landscape looking at the dock in the distance. Boats and jet skis hovering on top of the water. Emerald grass surrounded the church and the graves were as grey as pebbles. The stone wall enclosed off the sea. The path was very crumbly and dark grey.

  • KatieC

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    I peered over the magestic castle walls and saw a sky blue sea full of boats and jet skis floating ontop of the sea .In the east , was a stone ,100 year old castle which was ruled by a very rich man who was called king Edward.

  • husseind

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    I peered over the cliff staring in awe as a tremendous sight hooked my eyes. A crumbled ancient wall protected the house which rose at dawn and darkened at dusk. The ancient path lead to the vast open sea.

  • taraa

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    The grass, which was growing was grabbing the sunlight, were
    standing peacefully. The turquoise blue ocean was splashing into the shore. The rocky walls were surrounding the plants, leaving protection. The colossal building were at the far end of the view with a little sight of people. It was wonderful.

  • taraa

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    I missed some sentences I’ll do it again here:
    The grass, which was grabbing the sunlight, was growing. The
    turquoise ocean was splashing into the shore. The rocky walls were surrounding the plants, leaving the protection. The colossal
    buildings were at the far end of the view with a little sight of people.

  • kalela

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    I peered over the castle ruins to see the beautiful plush green grassland. Beyond this emerald blanket was a mighty ocean that beat against the shore. Boats bobbed up and down merrily on the waves. Meanwhile the blessed churchyard sat in peaceful tranquillity. Such a pretty view.

  • nimav

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    The lush,lime,green grass lay as people played on it.There beyond it, the calm but cold sea filled with boats was bright as the sky.

  • ethanl

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    The lush green grass stud beside the dangerus rocky wall the terquse sea splashed against the sandy sea wallst the long branches waved in the air beside it. the tall house which is made out of bricks was surounded by giant trees. the bouts saild throo the ruff deep sea!

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